NEA- first draft feedback

 Teacher feedback:

Peer feedback:

Summary: 

Overall the website is strongest but still needs development on each page 

Contents pages are okay but need to add lines and more framing to give it more structure 

Front covers are weakest areas, they lack vibrancy and seem a little dull

Action plan: 

Continue to develop website 

Take some more photos, of different models, for website 

Need to add an editors note to website 

Finish editing and upload 30 second clip to website 

Create new mockups for front covers- may try different colour palettes, layout etc 

Need to add lines and framing to contents pages 

May have to edit contents pages further after adding lines 

NEA- first drafts

 Front covers: 

Contents pages:

Website link:

https://19-abec.wixsite.com/viemagazine 

NEA- contents page development

 I have been working on my contents pages and finalising the layout. I would like to incorporate more onto the left hand side of the pages but this will come further on once the right hand side is full

NEA- website development

 

I have updated my website now and have two working pages- these still need further development and i also still need to add my audio visual clip.

 For the behind the lens segment, i would like to create the film reels on either side interactive but this will come at a later date. 

NEA- contents page progression

 

I am now focusing on developing my contents pages for both editions 

NEA- front cover 2

 

I have now completed my other front cover but i still need to make some tweaks before submitting as my first draft 

NEA- contents page 2 continued

 I am now continuing to finish off my contents page for my second edition by adding in article titles.