Tuesday, October 28, 2025

NEA- first draft feedback

 Teacher feedback:


Peer feedback:


Summary: 

Overall the website is strongest but still needs development on each page 

Contents pages are okay but need to add lines and more framing to give it more structure 

Front covers are weakest areas, they lack vibrancy and seem a little dull

Action plan: 

Continue to develop website 

Take some more photos, of different models, for website 

Need to add an editors note to website 

Finish editing and upload 30 second clip to website 

Create new mockups for front covers- may try different colour palettes, layout etc 

Need to add lines and framing to contents pages 

May have to edit contents pages further after adding lines 

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NEA- final website link

  https://19-abec.wixsite.com/viemagazine Pages are home and stories